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Post by Comet on Jan 16, 2011 18:18:02 GMT -5
Comet was walking through the forest. He was getting some fresh air.
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Post by Comet on Jan 16, 2011 18:20:28 GMT -5
Out of nowhere Comet felt a pain in is neck. He saw blood streaking down to his paws. Then a fast black figure sweeped by again another shot of pain in his right flank. He screamed. How could he fight something he couldn't see?
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Post by Comet on Jan 16, 2011 18:21:26 GMT -5
The figure shot by again. Comet screamed louder he fell to the ground and didn't move....
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Post by Comet on Jan 16, 2011 18:22:41 GMT -5
Slowly Comet's eyes started to close. he breathing slowed.
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Post by Foxy on Jan 16, 2011 18:23:03 GMT -5
Foxy was at her resting rock in her territory when she heard a shreech.She stopes to listen but didn't think much of it.
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Post by Comet on Jan 16, 2011 18:23:28 GMT -5
the leader lay still on the ground.
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Post by Comet on Jan 16, 2011 18:26:38 GMT -5
Comet's breathing came back he got up and looked around. blood dripping in a pool. He ran towards the cliff.
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Post by Comet on Jan 16, 2011 18:29:49 GMT -5
He sat down at the edge and forgot completly about the figure then he got pushed. He screamed so loud! "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!" Comet screamed he hit a rock and flew into the water. He lay still in the water sinking and sinking and sinking......
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Post by Foxy on Jan 16, 2011 18:31:51 GMT -5
(For the last time use one reply, you can fit all of that in there and it would be easier!!!)
Foxy heard the shreek. She got up and stoped when she relized where it was comming from. She couldn't, She must not. She won't. SHe sighed and turned back.
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Post by Magena on Jan 16, 2011 22:55:11 GMT -5
Magena was gathering herbs. She had heard the shrieks of pain.. She looked around. Where was that coming from? She whispered to herself. She looked around and came to a cliff. OH DEAR LORD! She cried as she saw a cat in the water. She dove off the side and plunged into the water. She swam to it and dragged it to the bank of the water.. Oh my gods.. She muttered. This cat just got attacked by death itself.. FOXY!!! She screamed.
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Post by Comet on Jan 16, 2011 22:57:34 GMT -5
Comet wasn't breathing.
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Post by Magena on Jan 16, 2011 22:59:41 GMT -5
Oh dear lord.. She wailed. She gave him mallow to try and pick up the breathing.
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Post by Comet on Jan 16, 2011 23:00:54 GMT -5
Comet still didn't respond...
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Post by Magena on Jan 16, 2011 23:03:37 GMT -5
Magena tried everything. Please.. Please.. She muttered.
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Post by Comet on Jan 16, 2011 23:04:54 GMT -5
Comet was getting colder and colder.
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